Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, May 31, 2021
Who am I poem
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Great poem Andre. You have thought hard about ways to describe yourself with wonderful success. I really like the two lines about gymnastics and the lion. They are both very descriptive and well-written. Great job on including a simile. What sorts of things are you a leader to your family with? Keep up the amazing writing Andre.
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